Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-34320391-20180617024644/@comment-34320391-20180624224138

Cora your ending was beautiful, I love it.

^Skylander, I like the idea of Majapi finding out that Riley rides a dragon, but you should make it more realistic. Great story, slight changes required. Firstly, the moment you say 6-1, both Nik and Newt will step forward next to you. This is because both Red and Cora are there, so Nik and Newt don't want to look like cowards. Red will then step up because she can throw a punch, and also doesn't want to look like a coward, staying behind Riley. Cora will then step up to join the whole gang.

Secondly, Majapi isn't a plain out bully. He's a bit angry at times, but doesn't come with his mob (which he doesn't have 'cause he's a loner), and may sometimes fight.

But the rest of the idea was good. Go to a secluded place like in the forest. Moonlight confronts only Majapi. Riley vanishes off the map, leaving only a note behind. This leaves Majapi surprised and now has a goal, to stop the gang from discovering dragons.

To change your part, Riley, you can say Majapi approached you and Cora while talking about your parent(s). Cora was crying or something over the fact and wasn't able to react to Majapi. Riley then fights Majapi (only), leading him into the woods and beating him with Moonlight.

Also, question. Is the party still on? (It might be useful to bring characters like Newt/Cora, Red/Nik, Red/Riley together, to talk.)