User blog comment:Toothless the Nightfury/Storms and Strike Class (fan fiction)/@comment-7845946-20130330011819/@comment-3230751-20130330013116

hank you for your honest observation. I do agree that many of the sentances are short. Perhaps it is mostly in that section though. Sometimes I use it for dramatic purposes. For instance the "It got worse" sentance when Gobber is watching the lightning strike the barn. SO anyway, thanks again! I aprreciate you saying that the characters act "in character"! That was really whwat I was going for!