Talk:Night Fury

Just a few things I'd like to point out to anyone editing this page: I'm sorry if I sound really volatile. I'm just tired of editing this page to essentially say the same thing over and over again.
 * 1) Explode is an intransitive verb. The verb does not take a direct object. You  cannot  "explode something." You can, however, cause something to explode.
 * 2) The Night Fury's fire does not ignite anything. To ignite is to light on fire. Nothing in the film was set on fire by the Night Fury (save for the Red Death's on fumes at the end, but that was simply because it was a flammable gas). In the film, anything its fireballs made contact with exploded or suffered an explosion (e.g. the watchtowers in the beginning, the Red Death at the end). This does not mean, however, that it cannot burn (as seen with Hiccup's face and the inside of a one very unfortunate Terrible Terror).
 * 3) That paragraph beginning with "When combined with its..." is too attached to the ideas of the prior paragraph to be detached; to start the paragraph talking about its other stealthy traits and then  randomly  make reference to the topic of the flames in the previous paragraph is simply horrid structure. It can be done, but it'd be poor writing, and I'd be more than likely to change it back.

Grandiloqua 04:31, May 11, 2010 (UTC)