Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-35702393-20180628083548/@comment-34320391-20180703021342

A couple of things.

1. Should Riley say that Cora's a Hiccup descendent AND that they're siblings? The later reveal could be found out later, maybe, but that's Cora's choice.

2. Instead of saying the maps looked like tunnels under Berk, say they looked like a 3D maze, of sorts. This makes the second time going back to the Arena worth it, to actually find out.

3. The note: Would Riley throw it towards us now, or in the forest. Maybe while I'm chasing Riley, Riley throws the note towards me, to stall me so Riley can escape.

4. Can you show that Red glimpses Riley reading a note which had mysteriously appeared in Riley's chest pocket? It was after reading this, that Riley ran away. (This is the note with the threat).

5. You can maybe reference Jurassic World, where the lady manages to sprint in high heels, while you run (if you want)

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I liked how you moved the plot, and it also helped for me to have an idea what to do after my conversation with Trista (my cousin).