Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-34320391-20180712000122/@comment-35702393-20180722063032

^ Okat thanks. I'll edit that out some time later. I felt like I was rushing the ending. And yeah, can we split it to two parts? XD Its really long now that I think about it.

What if I do the part / scene where Red meets up with Nik until they go to the arena, and then the rest would be yours where you say what happens in the arena until we head back home?

Or if you have a much different approach, It'd be really helpful. But I think its fine already, I just need to make the edits. The Caleb/Red scene can be on my next section where Red tries to sneak herself and the weapons out but then Caleb spots her *shrugs*

Coz it would be reall interesting to know what Nik was thinking of on those scenes. Like... when Red held his hand, when Red told him about Arkin, when Red and him were alone in the underground bunker XD It would be exciting to see what the story is in Nik's POV