User blog comment:Invisiblewing/HTTYD Retelling/Fanfiction: Part 10/@comment-12598077-20130820124806

Not bad! Not bad at all! Worth the wait...it's pretty obvious though that you're not following the movie with accuracy in mind, because that was so not how the Snotlout/Nightmare interaction went. The Astrid/Nadder thing wasn't quite how I envisioned it going, but it was actually a little better; I think you have the right of it, just because Astrid is now firmly in Hiccup's corner doesn't mean she's immediately comfortable around every single dragon. She was cool about him leading the Nightmare out in the movie because she'd already seen him control three other dragons.

Next part had better begin with Hiccup comparing the Nadder's flying to Toothless's; I'm really hoping to see that!