Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-35702393-20180628083548/@comment-34320391-20180701004127

This is just a suggestion, but you can write a section that goes during the slow dance.

Red approaches Nik, but Nik is pulled away by a cute blonde. The blonde then hugs Nik in a way that seems like the two are close. Red can maybe feel jealous or angry, but then to finish the chapter Red can meet a friend from Wingmaiden Island. This friend can maybe hint at the type of Red from Wingmaiden Island (because I think Red was a different type of person when she was younger) or can tease or respect Red of their past. After that, Red spots Riley who gestures her away.

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I still think that Riley should write the section of Red being taken underground, so we should leave that section. If you want to write a second section overlapping Riley's section, it might get confusing.