Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-34833607-20180917005215/@comment-35702393-20181019223309

Hmm actually, to criticize it (honestly now) without questioning your technical abilities, yeah what awesome said, the rain could use some help, and maybe aside from rain you could add another element in the background just to provide depth because overall the whole thing looks fkat. I like the hair but aside from it being wavy, maybe add a few strands here and there. J like how you made the hair solid like but hair is supposed to be flowy and undefined so a few strands out of place might help with emphasis 😂😉😊