Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-34320391-20180617024644/@comment-34320391-20180627105000

a) I don't know how to put this but Hana can you and Cora not see Majapi enter the woods? This shifts the focus of the chapter away from Majapi.

Or

b0 Can you see Majapi enter the woods, and then afterwards Riley realises there's a note in his pocket (the threat). It can't have been Majapi because he was in the forest.

This is because we DON'T want the audience to know Majapi is evil. It's suspicious if we emphasise on Majapi all of a sudden, without explanation. We should avoid focus on him altogether. And the note slipped into Riley's chest pocket was actually planted by a trained baby changewing (of Majapi's). I prefer a), with no hint of Majapi's guilt except my slight part. Red and Cora can maybe even see Majapi head into the library as a red herring, to throw the reader off.

(While Majapi actually was responsible for the fire, which he lit via dragon, remotely).