Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-32745070-20190205222446/@comment-35775904-20190212225245

Sorry, I had to rush my review to go make dinner.

I think the section was very dark, which is good. This is Vix’s perception coming into this and feeling very bombarded with emotions, due to hi lack of presence in the past. He isn’t still getting a grip on life as a guardian while simultaneously being shoved into a war with people and his emotions. This is a good character conflict. Really good section.

I think we do have to all agree on a couple things to clarify our sections though.

1) we are living in a modern time, (21st) century, but how far advanced is our technology? I’ve seen us mention Raidios, Cameras, restaurants, and fire fighters. So do we have things like cell phones and WiFi? Cause we haven’t mentioned that, we use a horn and TT mail...so we meeed to decide that before we start publishing chapters. We might have to edit some things. Also keep in mind, that as we say, the Vikings and dragons left at hiccups time and sealed themselves in the hidden world, so they really haven’t developed with the surface tech above...

2) Living style. Are we in cabins away from the clubhouse, or rooms connected to the clubhouse/kitchen?