Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-35702393-20180628083548/@comment-35851166-20180702123912

Gaaah all of this is great. Time to catch up. Newt, that was great, ill write my pov in a bit. About after the party. Plz beg to differ, but i actually pictured my confronting with mr. Smith otherwise. I thought that instead of being understandinh, he would get rrally mad at me, not only for goinh with out permission, but because i could have gotten hurt or died. But he doesnt say that. Becausw of this, he slaps me(were outsidd the courthouse so no one important sees us)and scolds me. He calls me an idiot, and hr says he was right about my friends and how i shouldnt hang out with them. Im trying my best to take this easy, but when he says i cant take care of my self. I calmly start talking back, but after he says something else(idk what yet) i start yelling.(this would be thr first time i spoke up, let alone yelled at him. I tell him stuff like how if he wasnt so hard on me i woulf of asked them abd how i couldnt take it and he wouldnt say anythibg because hes never seen me lile this. After me yelling some stuff, i would run off into the water whole. When newt finds me, (because if he knows about the hurting, he knows where i go) he tells me and u guys about the place we could hang out and train. We do every day, but when u guys leave to go home, i stay until i can think of someth ing to do

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