User blog comment:MythikathePanther/Fan Character/@comment-3248027-20101203174042

Manga Maniac is correct.

This strikes me as really Sueish. Which, I mean, is certainly okay for fun and, frankly, can be quite difficult to fix. I know what it's like to create something you love, and then be like- "But that's how she IS!"

And to be honest, run nearly any main character of a series through a Mary Sue test, and they will nearly always fail.

For example, Hiccup (for this purpose, in the books) DEFINITELY has a lot of Mary Sueish traits- prodigy at Dragonese and swordfighting, rather unique hair, no mother, a pretty tough life, a streak of almost unbelievable kindness, son of a chief, "the chosen one", the only one who's "right"... (Of course, Hiccup has PLENTY, PLENTY, of flaws and elements working against him as well, which balance him out as character.)

So Mary-Sueism really isn't something to feel bad about, especially as a young writer, which I assume you are. It's just something to be aware of. ;D

But if you're SERIOUS about writing/creating characters in the future (i.e., an aspiring author), I'd be happy to try to give you some pointers.