Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-34320391-20180712000122/@comment-34320391-20180722060821

^A couple of things. It wouldn't be the Midnight Sun yet. Change my line to "The midnight sun's coming..." Midnight Sun is where it's sunny non-stop for 2 weeks. The days leading to The Midnight Sun will be really long, like today (in book time).

Also, I really liked the tie-in to that older section of you carving yourself on the wall.

Also, to tie the section in together, maybe we can include the guards coming back to the arena. Specifically the one Auxillary Officer we keep referring to. This forces Red to pull Nik into the underground bunker, and we hide as Senior Auxillary Officer Clerik walks right over the bunker entrance. (You know, suspense and all). Do you want to split the section into two? I can write one section in between your section above (with the Caleb/Red scene)...