Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-34320391-20180617024644/@comment-34320391-20180623055504

Sky, I won't kick you. I might be a bit pissed, yeah, but it's fine. You're learning. Keep writing where you think you need to write.

And a tip Riley (and anyone else) if you think your writing is getting a bit crazy. Just react, limit your actions.

Just write reactions to other people's parts, from your POV. For example Nik - Risk, Newt - Something About My Feelings and Red - Rain, are all just reactions of what had happened, in their POV, with a little twist on their feelings/actions.

Or you can write a 'thoughts section' as well, like Cora - Sorry, Cora - Change, Newt - My Head Hurts, Nik - Frustrations and Red - A Liar and A Punch To The Face. Most of them are thought sections with little action and are another way to show your character developing without going crazy.