User blog comment:Toothless the Nightfury/Storms and Strike Class (fan fiction)/@comment-6517819-20130811002812/@comment-3230751-20130811024007

Ah, thanks for pointing that stuff out. I wrote this MANY months ago, so I am sure it is chock full of errors and areas that could be improved. I may look into getting some time to work on it, but it was my first fanfiction, and since I am currently working on other (better) ones, I think I'll have to let this one sit. I am 18 btw, and I do understand what you are saying! Thanks for being honest. Hopefully I'll get some free time to work on this, but with college and other stuff I am sort of busy!