Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-37150451-20190305083508/@comment-34320391-20190310022229

Oh. My. Gosh.

Both of your writings, both DSL and Aiden's are beautiful. 😍

Not only the Kaiden part but the style of writing has improved so much since I last read your sections. They were both like structured amazingly, like how HttyDeathsong's flowed from each plot point, the fight, to Canela, to Kate and the Kaiden thing wasn't really forced and aaaahhhh. It's just beautiful.

I like the angle of them keeping Kaiden secret, it'll be... interesting. Also DSL, your section was so good. Like meaningful as well. Like "''Do I really mean it? I don't know.  I mean can I love again, after all this loss?" and "But I am a nothing child, I am worthless.  I am not worth you, you deserve better." .... ''That's some serious drama, with the sweet ending with Stormslicer...

You know what, I've just got myself addicted to the Guardians story again.